reply to post by Im a Marty
The start, I hate to be cruel but you looked like a defective bobble head doll.
I was actually about to stop playing the vid and just as my hand touched the mouse the drum solo kicked in...
Damn Im glad I didnt cut it, IT WAS FRICKEN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You started the singing strong but before the first chorus you lost your place, for a performer of your calibre this is unacceptable. I appreciate at
this stage you are still somewhat of a raw talent but that is unforgivable in this business, get ya sh!t sorted!!!!!!!!!!
I felt the emotion during the first bridge but just felt that the movement was to quick for the anguish he was relating, I thought it could have been
a bit slower, more wavey and more heartfelt.
Im pleased to say the headbanging improved at the first chorus and the scream............ Ill just say......sublime, perfect. but I did notice you got
tired or dizzy after 30 sec of hardcore headbangin and was a bit less enthusiastic after that, you will need to build up those neck muscles and kill
some brain cells to improve there I think.
Once again I just felt you werent really in the moment for the slow part, he singing about the most beautiful creatures hes ever seen dying..... and
UR FRICKEN GRINNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the actions that went with the music were beautiful and I could almost feel the rope and tears but once again to fast, it has to be timed to the
The end is great, your singing is synced to the music, the bangin is energetic and structured but the fingers
dude we needa get you a new fill in
Different type of performance to the last one
Music choice I think you did better, more mainstream so more fans 8/10
dance was to inconsistant for my liking, flashes of brilliance followed by utter crap 6/10
As a whole the 2 combined reasonably well 7/10
the effects were just annoying, kept covering your face and mouth 3/10
Setting was kinda irrelevant asyou were sitting down but you couldve gothed up the room or something 5/10
Overall for this performance you scored 29/50 but to be fair it wasnt you who was the issue it was the background and effects.
For next time, you need to think about where people will be focused and make sure they have an uninterupted view, A bit of mood lighting or props
perhaps, really feel the emotion of the song the audience is clever and will be able to spot a song whore a mile away FEEL THE SONG BECOME THE SONG.
And finally LEARN THE SONG!!!!!!!!!!
I will not accept out of sync singing from you ever again, youve been warned!!!!!!!!!