posted on Apr, 25 2011 @ 04:09 PM
Im 21... A budding song writer but I have a small problem. I think it's a common enough thing but when I try to song write all I seem to end up with
is poetry. Heheheh... Beautiful, stirring poetry...
Seriously though, if anyone has ever had the same sort of dillemma i'd be interested in how when you sit down with a note pad and start writing what
you do??? Don;t worry about ''song structure'' and the ''science'' of it. Iv read enough of the same books for that. Heheh...
Just an example of what ends up coming out.
Over on the offing, far from the shore,
Our Nemesis, our eternal effervescent epiphany sits bare chest as a whore,
Tangled through and through,
This long, winding road sprawls the distance we travel with our heavy load,
Bubbling pools murmur sweet nothings and pass,
Long forgotten dreams like streams,
Always the same but ever changing,
Swim along side and do nothing but bide,
Our time here is short and we are vast,
Minds like the stars, akin to the gods,
Lacking however hindsight as that epiphany,
Bubbles it does.