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Poem I Wrote Called "Lights"

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posted on Apr, 16 2011 @ 10:16 PM
So here's a poem I wrote... hopefully you laugh

It's about me getting what I want and everyone else's burning in hell
By: An
I see the light upon the sky
It is the apple of my eye
If I choose to leave this place
Grant me this and give me grace
In the stars I’ll find my peace
I’ll no longer worry about police
Now I’m gone and on my way
Never thought I’d feel this gay
Watching those who lack some love
It's too late now I'm like a dove
Back to the future like Marty Mclfy
I’m so happy I’ll never die
Watch this bird it is my finger
I’ll put it down once you linger
The Underworld is where you belong
I’m right here, you may find King Kong
I heard he breathes fire and eats your flesh
Love right now feels pretty fresh

posted on Apr, 16 2011 @ 10:18 PM
Very nice my friend!


posted on Apr, 16 2011 @ 10:25 PM
reply to post by prolific

Thanks. Did it paint a picture?

posted on Apr, 16 2011 @ 10:25 PM
I'm digging it my friend.

Love the symbolism.

With Love,

Your Brother

posted on Apr, 16 2011 @ 10:26 PM
Bizarre poem, kind of morbid though.
edit on 16/4/11 by AdamsMurmur because: removed haiku

posted on Apr, 16 2011 @ 10:34 PM
reply to post by AdamsMurmur

Some of the greatest works in history were morbid

I think it's more imaginative describing a feeling none of us know... the feeling of pure freedom, salvation, and normalcy blasyting off into hyperspace into a different dimension to live with people that got their sh*t right

edit on 02/23/2011 by mrjones7885 because: (no reason given)

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