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The Astral Gondeleer(poem)

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posted on Mar, 18 2011 @ 07:47 PM
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To silent void its vapid sphere
you to i are droll and dreare
though there is one i hold me near
who brought her song to bring me cheer

And thats madame, cassiopeia
coloured on the mirror mere
whos shores are swept with waters clear
and where i row at you my dear

At the loch the the lanterned peir
the silohouttes across a weir
that gull upon the isle of eire
thats i the astral gondaleer

Whos seen creation stark and sheer
its currents calm or in career
where with a paddle and a stear
before your stars i may appear

Should that pass ile bring you here
with a wishing of a tear
and of your hues beyind revere
about my globe may they veer

And shine they shalt on gaia's nadir
upon my wildes and chandelier
thespiae and its brazier
all resplendances aground if Ea

Our sanderlings of windermere
buttercups and our reigndeer
the chapel gardens of sophia
its glory be ave maria

How your melodies smite mine ear
raise the crowds above their fear
part the oceans for all to hear
from jeru to the poles frontier

Cry the golden chanticleer
the holy lands its solemn seer
the ladybug or frosted stear
the starlings of the stone chantier

Sound the morning trumpeteer
the cornets of our overseer
all otherjoys to all are mere
missives to the ones you rear

so shouild your starform wander here
eternral bride wel have no peer
in my parades of lanterneer
beside my oar and oak austere

In laze ile lilter and laveer
this king of earth no womb did rear
untill my waters dissapear
ile row at you in joyous tear

Away away upon the mere
with the starlit gossamer
dorado and the grenadier
anon ile row at you my dear


i have around 60 of such poems,if you wish to see more just ask!
no i dont use a rhyming dictionary and i dont actually read other poetry as i see it as below par compared to mine!




posted on Mar, 18 2011 @ 07:55 PM
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Very nice, thanks for that.

btw...gondolier not gondeleer.

I'm not a spellig nazi but seeing as it's the title I thought I'd mention it.

cheers and keep writing.



posted on Mar, 18 2011 @ 08:01 PM
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reply to post by nerbot
 


A man of his word more or less
Thanks



posted on Mar, 19 2011 @ 04:46 PM
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Originally posted by nerbot
Very nice, thanks for that.

btw...gondolier not gondeleer.

I'm not a spellig nazi but seeing as it's the title I thought I'd mention it.

cheers and keep writing.

i shall keep on writing,i plan to pen several hundred aswell as a few books and screenplays.

one will be about MI6 being the first to invent time travel and saving the world with it,bringing down the roman empire and cia,giant spook wars through time!
watch your screens!



posted on Mar, 20 2011 @ 08:03 PM
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I was pleasantly surprised how good your poem is after reading your alien mouse encounter. You are definitely a talented poet I'll give you that! Post more of them. Thanks for sharing.



posted on Mar, 23 2011 @ 04:42 PM
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Originally posted by BLKMJK
I was pleasantly surprised how good your poem is after reading your alien mouse encounter. You are definitely a talented poet I'll give you that! Post more of them. Thanks for sharing.


no problem take it as a gift,ile post another one tonight.

must that thread be reduced to a mouse!?,i saw an alien ships for christs sake!




 
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