posted on Jul, 23 2010 @ 02:11 AM
Welcome to ATS. Three things I can recommend to you:
1. Paragraphs, try it out, they work wonders
2. Links to actual sources, not a "friend told me, secret confessions, eyes only documents, etc." Actual sources for any posts pertaining to
information, confessions, revelations or any other news would be greatly helpful lest you get bundled in with the rest of the skunk works babble.
3. Try using these more often > . < Once you get to about the fifteen sentence mark and still going, you will lose even the most hard core reader and
Have a nice stay,
[edit on 23-7-2010 by Kingalbrect79]