I fell asleep that night content as only a teenager can be,David Bowie was rotating on the table The Cygnet Committee .
Outside the window of a boys room lay the sky , full of stars and planets , spirits sent and unsent.
My dream was one of death and fatality, I awoke but was still asleep,I awoke again and fear grabbed me, I must remember the dreams message , I must , I must...my soul mocked and said I never would, now I know Iam dead and have been for decades.
We are all dead my friend.

Will there be more?? I wait in much anticipation!

2nd line.




[edit on 2-10-2009 by catalyst2466]

Originally posted by catalyst2466
Will there be more?? I wait in much anticipation!

2nd line.




[edit on 2-10-2009 by catalyst2466]

Only that the dead live amongst us all, but we live and breathe and can influence, but we were the dead, before birth infused life.

That's cool man. I'd like to see more of it but it's like a small prose poem which is groovy in and of itself.

Your writing is suited well for short stories. Write some more buddy!