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If I Could Capture the Meaning

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posted on Aug, 28 2009 @ 08:14 PM
If I could capture the meaning
Of thoughts I am feeling
And words that show
How endless and eternal
The depths of yearning.

Seeking the thought that eludes me
Painted picture of hope and wanting
With words that cry out longing.

Hearts are weak as needs are stronger
Making wonders magical
Powerful energy drawing you closer
To me.

Blending, united, perfectly fit
Together creating bliss
Bountiful love, everlasting joy
Sharing worlds, souls entwined.

Growth and expansion perfectly expressed
All That Is encouraging and knowing
Teaching the lessons of growing
Darkly, our secrets are telling.

Bound to me for eternity
No other can last in constant contrast
My heart sings what words cannot
Strength enduring, softly weeping.

With all there is to desire
Cherishing the seconds forever
Hope and truth, hand in hand
Walking ever together.

This feeling without thoughts or imaginings
Taking me where vision is lacking
My heart begging for release.

Hear me, know me
For my God has led me to you, bringing you nearer
Spirits dancing the music by
Expressing belief and knowing.

posted on Aug, 28 2009 @ 08:54 PM
I liked this and your work is genuine.
I to have trouble expressing my thoughts on paper. Some days I can, others not so. Sometimes it flows and then the flow is cut off mid sentence or idea. However the feeling still remains. Keep it up S&F!

[edit on 28-8-2009 by N3krostatic]

posted on Aug, 28 2009 @ 09:04 PM
reply to post by Hazelnut

worth reading , and well done .
thank you , we all bleed a little in writting the wrong feeling

posted on Aug, 28 2009 @ 09:56 PM
reply to post by N3krostatic

Thank you for commenting and the for the compliment. It is hard to get out what I'm feeling when I force it. I wrote this one 2 years ago. Its one of the only writings I kept. I just can't please myself so I trash them all.

posted on Aug, 28 2009 @ 09:57 PM
reply to post by readerone

I'm flattered that you think so. I was worried a little about exposing myself like that, but hey my worries were for naught.

Its kind of out there, but it takes all kinds right?

posted on Aug, 29 2009 @ 11:30 PM
reply to post by Hazelnut

I liked it. The fact that People such as Yourself are brave enough to put something of original content, and value out for All to see; is how awakening begins for People..


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