So, mister walker, have we thought about a rewrite?
Its all #.
Oh, its not that bad, you’re nearly there, its just...
I had a dream last night, you know, I felt something that feels so right and so simple and has pointed out the answer.
What answer?
All this #, its too complicated, everything. I know why I am having trouble.
Trouble? Listen, your work has been brilliant, you are just missing the detail...
Stuff the detail!
Don’t you see, its all around us. Three years I’ve spent in details, symbols, this god that god, signifies this, metaphor for that, stuff it,
bloody words, bloody dates.....
What is wrong with just being here, now....?
You having problems at home?
No
Drugs?
No
Girls?
No, stuff it, Mr Frangetteli, do you understand, I am dropping out, it’s all #, what is this world coming too? Your in a bubble if you think we are
exploring big questions in all this crap. Its so simple, and I am sick of being part of the whole fabrication.
Look, your young, I was too you know. You have to be Careful not too lose touch. This is a big world and to get through you have to face
realities...
I am.
No, you are dreaming. Look I will accept the assignment as it is, you are under pressure somewhere and i will keep that in consideration... but come
back to earth, it will pass and you can look back and laugh.
Your not listening to me.
What?
The dream, you didn’t ask what it was.
Well, its your dream.
No its every-ones.
Every-ones?
Yes, that’s the point.
What point? Don’t speak in riddles young man, it doesn’t match your intelligence.
Well, I guess you don’t want to hear it.
What is it?
See-ya, good luck.
Every-ones?
Good-Bye Mr Frangetelli
But…comeback…I’m listening…hey…(sigh) I have dreams too you know...hey...[size=-1]what makes you so bloody
special...hey.....hey.......( sigh)
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OK, now I'm curious, what was the dream about? 
It was a good submission and I hope the judges look kindly upon it. Good luck my friend, I hope you do well,
wupy
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reply to post by mrwupy
Thankyou Wupy
The dream,
well
that's another story!
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reply to post by 2theC
How simple is it C?  ,
I need to know before the Human race Cracks like an Egg.  . I ponder the Center of our existence and What time do we all Get to know each other as one
big family.... The dreams , well I don't understand all of them Yet but I'm getting to it , there's just a bit of Procrastination in my Gene Pool
Solid Story 2C 
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Nice work. You left me hanging without knowing the dream though! Which makes me keep wondering and conjuring up my own ideas! Thanks for the read
awesome entry!
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reply to post by OrangeJuice
Thankyou Juice!
the dreams, no not always, but just sometimes they make perfect sense
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reply to post by jackflap
Thanks Jack
hanging without the dream...that could be the point...maybe...
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