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I I I I I I am trying

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posted on Apr, 20 2009 @ 05:54 AM
I pound my feet up to many stairs without ever seeing the summit
I pound my fists on lifeless doors that never crack open
I cut endless tape that is as red as my boiling blood
I scream words of frustration at an unlistening receiver
I cry tears of desperation upon undecipherable forms
I pay the price for an unknown outcome

posted on Apr, 20 2009 @ 05:59 AM
Feeling little frustrated a friend suggested i should write a poem.I laughed, me write a poem yea right!Anyway heres my first ever attempt at whatever this might be(im not sure what the requirements are for a poem haha).So i throw this out to the web.At least it cleared my head

posted on Apr, 20 2009 @ 06:14 AM
Well done dude.
The great thing about putting down, and posting it is that it will reach others. Others that feel the same, others that don't. Others that know your pain, and others that won't.

Keep it up bro.

posted on Apr, 20 2009 @ 06:29 AM
Well thanks at least someone heard my words, so i have at least accomplished something tonight.The younger me so would of kicked my ass for this haha

posted on Apr, 20 2009 @ 07:06 AM
reply to post by Azador

I know what you mean.
Don't beat yourself up for letting it flow out.
There are whole threads of this.
Keep an eye out.
Here is a link to a recent one.

posted on Apr, 20 2009 @ 09:11 AM
good grief can i relate to your poem.
i'm having a very pisstrating day.
but there's no way murphy and his friggin law are gonna get the better of me.
here ya go Murphy..
take this

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