This took about 1 year to write (that`s why high school went by in a flash)
Tell me what you think. Something about Angels Demons God etc. If you really belive in God it might offend, but i don`t really care. It`s just a story
and should be treated as such.
I will add a chapter a day to keep you coming back. I didn`t manage to transcribe all of it yet. I might require advanced english or higher, not
because of the grammar or words used, but because of the way phrases are formated.
It rimes if you can get into the rhythm.
Even souls die,
but tales are forever
THE ANCIENT WAY
`t seems you all consider God
to be nothing like a man,
you consider him so strong,
I wrote this to say you’re wrong.
As I know how the past was
and I wrote this just because,
i`ve once found an ancient legend
with an end that is just tragic.
"a world was once creating time
without beginning it was mine
with the souls it hid inside.
we were [all] even in our rights
with no rules and no fights."
the world was given to some souls
to control, break, love and hold.
they were all happy, but surprised
to hear about a souls demise
his name was ISA and he left
because his soul just pure hate kept.
there were souls of myth, of magic
of theft, of love, of night and tragic
and they didn’t have a need
for hate and demons to believe in.
Yet he wasn’t bad from birth,
he was innocence not dirt,
but how can one soul be special
without holding nothing precious.
because all that is pure evil
was hidden from them in a box
I recall its name 'Pandora'
but without it he was lost.
as innocence is nothing when
all do good and there’s no Hell.
he left, but swore that he’ll be back
they didn’t hear, not even that.
they since lived in pitch dark peace
ISA flew from space and wished.
he wasn’t like the rest of them
he went evil, almost mad.
how can i change the place where i created the thread, or delete it ?
[edit on 5-3-2009 by randel]