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(AIASP) A Bad Decision?




Topic started on 21-2-2008 @ 02:33 PM by more_serotonin_pls


Here we go.

Decided to go against pure SOC.

Hope you enjoy.


A Bad Decision?



So many eyes staring at me.
What do they want?
What are they waiting for?
Hardly patient are they?


Say something damnit. Well?

I remember my throat feeling as it was being crushed. It was agony. Every shallow burned as a limited amount of air crept its way from my Adam’s apple into my lungs. Not a gentle burning, but a harsh, severe burn.

What the hell do you want from me?
I’m not ready for all this.
I wasn’t expecting it.
Tell me what you want me to do.


My legs had frozen and my hands were shaking. I needed to sit down, but there was nowhere to sit. Nowhere I could see anyway. It was just a sea of hollow eyes. All pointing my way.

It was clear that they were a different species to me. Completely different. Different culture. Different expections. Different language.

If I speak in my language will they understand?
Why are you communicating in grunts?
USE WORDS!
DON’T JUST STARE!


There was a line of windows to the right of where I was held to the spot. Some things looked familiar. Trees, blue sky, soft white clouds, grass, concrete even. Yet through the glass – or whatever unbreakable material it was – it all looked different. Perhaps the atmosphere in the room was altering my perception. Could it have been the energy these ‘beings’, for want of better word, were giving out.

I decided I have to say something.

I swallowed hard; the oxygen burning deeper into my lungs.

I’m Mr. Hudson.
I’m your new English Teacher.


I was newly qualified.
I was amongst inner city youths.
I was in my own classroom for the first time.

I was alone in the loneliest place in the world.
I was surrounded by hostile strangers.

What have I done?..


[edit on 21-2-2008 by more_serotonin_pls]

[edit on 21-2-2008 by more_serotonin_pls]



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reply posted on 21-2-2008 @ 03:59 PM by Essedarius


I can honestly say I didn't see that one coming.
Great twist.



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reply posted on 22-2-2008 @ 09:41 AM by SIEGE


You got me on the ending. Wasn't even close to thinking that way.
Well done. I like it when a story messes with my mind.



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reply posted on 22-2-2008 @ 02:50 PM by mtmind


That was hilarious! :-) It brought a big smile and made me burst out laughing.

Thanks for the story ......



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reply posted on 23-2-2008 @ 07:18 PM by more_serotonin_pls


Thanks Folks.

To me me it's all about messing with the head so I'm kinda happy itr worked - I know A lot of people will dislike it but such is life.....


Just, thanks for reading. mxxxx



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