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Please Forgive Me

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posted on Nov, 3 2005 @ 08:42 PM
A really close friend of mine wrote this the other night, she's having a difficult time in her life right now, and she didn't mind if I shared what she wrote with you, ATS.

Please forgive me for what I've done,
I sacraficed on what could be a friendship for the one i love.
You can cut your wrists, blacken your eyes,
But it wasn't my fault,
You wern't the only one that cried.

I wish you were an image in my imagintaion,
None of this would ever happen.
It's fine now,
we won't deal with eachother again,
We wern't friends before,
I wouldn't dare to go that low.

You seemed to feel we were lower than dirt,
Which is typical from someone who's always hurt.
We'll leave you behind,
To keep ourselves satified.

We're through with you,
Bickering no more,
We don't need your negative attitude from what you "lack",
We're going to keep on going without having to look back.

That made me tear up the first time I read it.

posted on Nov, 16 2005 @ 07:48 PM
great imagery... maybe cuz i had to deal with somethin similar. Writing is a great way to just let loose, helps me all the time. I hope some people replies and she sees this, if not tell her her poem not only had good imagery, but was a great narrative of emotions


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