(STBSS Honorable Mention) Wolf's Pray

After reading On Writing I revisited this piece. I can NOW see revisions that would need to be made. I would say, "Not bad for a first draft."

I hope new readers enjoy this and if you want to write I can't emphasize enough that On Writing will help you.

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On Writing.

OK, a friend asked me to revive this. I'll "try".

Branson inhaled the pungent air. "So many different types of tobacco" he thought. It was an experience that he hadn't had in a LONG time. A drink AND tobacco. "This isn't NY may I remind me." "Noted. Thanks." Ass.

The sturdy owner had no problem with the events of the evening. Serving what the patrons wanted until.....

"GET YER SHYTE OUT OF HERE!"

Branson had been waiting on his second but it didn't seem likely at the moment. "Barkeep, my pint if you will?"

"Sorry mate, he's just a long wait on a short list. More trouble than he's worth. Just hate it when he bugs the patrons though. D'ya ken?"

Branson "kenned" quite well. This might actually be who he was looking for.



Best I've got tonight. I made a commitment though. This will continue, if people want it to.