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posted on Dec, 2 2023 @ 08:07 PM
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Home spun is the contest this time
Let me start with a bit of a rhyme.
And a short little ditty
Though really a pity
My rhyming is really a crime.


The End



posted on Dec, 2 2023 @ 08:59 PM
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a reply to: BingoMcGoof

Nice!!!



posted on Dec, 2 2023 @ 10:46 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions

I should have capitalized the Spun as ''home spun' accents the ''home'' where as in a good limrick, the ''home'' needs to be accented. homeSPUN,




posted on Dec, 3 2023 @ 02:06 AM
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a reply to: BingoMcGoof

Yes it really is an offence
And it doesn't make any sense
To enter that in
As if it could win
That's just my own fifty cents

But at least you did have a go
And humans are fickle you know
So if this post annoys
They might throw out some toys
And give you the win just to show

Star and Flag Bingo!
edit on 3-12-2023 by midicon because: (no reason given)



posted on Dec, 3 2023 @ 08:43 AM
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a reply to: BingoMcGoof

Short, sweet and to the point.




posted on Dec, 3 2023 @ 11:13 AM
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a reply to: midicon

Well oh my Mr. Con, your a fan
Please allow me as best as I can
To express with excitement
a little indictment
at meeting a good rhyming man

Your pleasure at reading my words
gives me flight like a flock of young birds
This means of expression
Or rather obsession
is practiced by only us nerds.



posted on Dec, 3 2023 @ 11:45 AM
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a reply to: BingoMcGoof

Sometimes my sense of humour doesn't come across on this medium.

I nearly replied with a rhyme but we'd be here all day lol.

That was a great reply!



posted on Dec, 3 2023 @ 12:12 PM
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a reply to: midicon

No, I got your humor well thanks. The Limerick is difficult to express at times. The words must rhyme and the meter and emphasis must be perfect or the entire poem fails. And you are right, we could be here the whole day crafting



posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 04:57 AM
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a reply to: BingoMcGoof

As a way of penance I'm giving this thread a little bump!

Forgive me.



posted on Dec, 4 2023 @ 01:12 PM
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a reply to: midicon

That's kind of you but I don't know what you think you owe penance for, I enjoyed your rhyming.



posted on Dec, 6 2023 @ 04:53 PM
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a reply to: BingoMcGoof

I enjoyed your lil' ditty. ;o)



posted on Dec, 6 2023 @ 07:16 PM
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a reply to: argentus

Thank you. I enjoy writing them. I get in a mood and pop construct them. Its important with limericks to be sure that not only the words rhyme but that the cadence flows as well. My father used to write them as well. One that he wrote years ago went.

A young Russian woman from Ompsk
Fell in love with three brothers named Vromsk
When it came time to marry
She spurned Dick and Harry
And married the brother named Tomsk.




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