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posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 06:26 PM
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All what we think
Is already gone
All what we see
Already passed
Every moment a new
Every heartbeat
The first
The last
What you grasp
Let it go
Give it away
Every drop
Of wisdom
Soul
Give it away
Let it flow
The river
Never the same

Our foundations
They may be crumbling
And in our path
We might be stumbling
Yet
Sometimes it takes a fool
To see
Beyond the mirror
The cup broken
Sometimes it takes a fool
To swim up the stream
And sometimes we need to forget it all
To remember
What we already are

The candle and the moon
In the quiet waters
The way out is in
It runs between you and it
Them and they
Here and there
Always new
Always where it ever was
Always



posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 06:36 PM
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a reply to: laffoe

poignant, thank you



posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 06:41 PM
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a reply to: UpIsNowDown
You are very welcome



posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 07:45 PM
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a reply to: laffoe

There once as a guy called Laffoe
Whose kind of a poet, you know
To the finish from start
He writes from the heart
When he posts it he just lets it go.



posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 08:02 PM
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a reply to: TerryMcGuire
Good to see you my old friend



posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 10:35 PM
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a reply to: TerryMcGuire

I once read a poem of Laffoe's
It was not like some regular Joe's
As I uttered each word
I most definitely heard
A bit of myself in the prose



posted on Dec, 29 2020 @ 11:19 PM
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a reply to: new_here
When we let ourselves be in the moment
Where we experience ourselves and the world just as it is
Without concepts, analysis or judgments to put in between us and what is
We realize there is something of us in it all
And something of everything in us
That whords cannot really share
But I know of what you speak


edit on 30-12-2020 by laffoe because: Repeated word



posted on Dec, 30 2020 @ 01:45 AM
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Beautiful.



posted on Dec, 30 2020 @ 07:39 AM
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a reply to: CopeLongCut
Thank you my friend



posted on Dec, 30 2020 @ 11:55 AM
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a reply to: new_here

Ah, most excellent. The final three lines just roll off the tongue in perfect meter. Wrapped around perfect sentiment as well. Kudos.



posted on Dec, 30 2020 @ 12:37 PM
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originally posted by: TerryMcGuire
a reply to: new_here

Ah, most excellent. The final three lines just roll off the tongue in perfect meter. Wrapped around perfect sentiment as well. Kudos.


Hey thanks! Your own limerick inspired me.



posted on Dec, 31 2020 @ 02:55 PM
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Happy New Year



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