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originally posted by: JustMike
a reply to: Sheye
You wrote this well, from the heart. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
You mentioned that you have problems with grammar, punctuation and so forth; I would be glad to help you with these issues. I have spent about 20 years editing and correcting texts -- books, journal articles and so on -- so if you would like me to pass on some basic advice to you, I'd be glad to do so. We can communicate via PMs.
At the very least, I can help you avoid some of the most common errors, which The Chicago Manual of Style and similar publications warn about.
By all means ask: if I'm not around, there will be others who can advise.
there are some questions I have