Ok here is my really bad story

I know its bad because Im really busy right now and I needed something to do so I decided to right this. I work on
this when ever I have free time. The chapters aren't that long tho, just so ya know, and it has a bad title
A Run For Life
(BTW this story starts off in first person than switches to third, just so you don’t get confused.)
“…and what happens when you reveal that you are working for the CIA? You get 16 rounds of bullets lodged in your skull! How do I know this? Before
my brother was ruthlessly murdered by the CIA he told me. The CIA barged into the house and fired 16 rounds of bullets into his skull…why am I
risking my safety posting this? Because people need to know the truth about the CIA and how deadly it can be!...”
That was my post… that was the post that changed my life forever… the post that brought me many friends… and took many from me…this is my
story.
It was late at night, a young girl at the age of 14 sat at her computer tears in her eyes as she posted about her brothers death. Her brother was
killed by the CIA for releasing information about his job to the love of his life. The small monkey sitting on her shoulder whipped a tear from her
eye with his tail.
“Thanks Saru… don’t worry…they will pay for killing Kei…if it’s the last thing I do...”
“Sir, Keiroku Sasaki has been successfully relieved of his duties...but there’s a small problem…”
“What it is?”
“His younger sister… Reikuro Sasaki… has posted on a website about it…she knows we killed him Sir…”
“Send the WR Team after her…”
“…but Sir! She’s only 14!”
“DO IT!”
“…Yes Sir…”
Rei woke up the next morning to banging at her door, the banging of the CIA’s WR Team. This didn’t affect Rei though… she knew…she knew that
the CIA would come after her for what she wrote. Rei quickly jumped up, grabbed a pre-packed bag she had made after the post, knowing she would need
it. She scooped up the monkey named Saru who was deep asleep and ran out the back door, not looking back, not slowing down. Staying at a steady
pass…running from her home, running from her life… running from her past.
New chapter up soon
[edit on 11-2-2005 by Reikuro]