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[CRE 2017] LITEBRITE

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posted on Jun, 3 2017 @ 02:40 PM
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Non-Writer

Litebrite
So strong, yet so weak

Litebrite
Deliver the truth

Litebrite
Your love is breathtaking

Litebrite
I am lost

Litebrite
I pray for you, for all of gods children

Litebrite
Take my soul, for you I will last forever

Litebrite
It is me...

I can now see

THE END


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edit on 3-6-2017 by iWontGiveUP because: The beginning




posted on Jun, 7 2017 @ 06:54 AM
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posted on Jun, 7 2017 @ 11:21 AM
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a reply to: JinMI

Thanks





posted on Jun, 7 2017 @ 05:52 PM
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a reply to: iWontGiveUP

Beaut mate. My second reading of your writing. This time I read slowly. Should be a song.

my kind regards,

bally




posted on Jun, 7 2017 @ 06:32 PM
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Very nice


Well done!



posted on Jun, 7 2017 @ 06:37 PM
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a reply to: bally001

I have the piano melody in mind

Thank you all



posted on Jun, 7 2017 @ 06:44 PM
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a reply to: iWontGiveUP

A piano melody accompanying your story would be great. Go for it.

kind regards,

bally




posted on Jun, 29 2017 @ 06:27 AM
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a reply to: iWontGiveUP
Very pretty.




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