Six Feet Under

The light shining
from your eyes,
it pierces through
my deepest dark

Only those aware
can feel it's strike
like a tether
to the soul

Daunting, watching
always there
forever in it's
present stare

Looking forward
never back
soon the end
it's coming fast

Forever lost
from those who came
lightening strikes
all is lost

All that's left now
open eyes
what's the cost?
forgotten trust

Walk the plank
leave the game
time is naught
nothing sought.

Though as Creations carrying different manifested forms, we are still fractals of the SOURCE or CREATOR
So to practice hate against one another, causes negative effects on the WHOLE* as well as ALL* our Maker


Exercising Defense with restraint, is equivalent to the Warriors keeping their swords in sheath
Attempting to exhaust all avenues of logical defense, before the drums of war beat

As we overcome TOGETHER the trials and tribulations, we gain better focus and sight
Enhancing our collective consciousness as one, recognizing what truly is wrong and right

NAMASTE*******

a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

Yes...But did you like my Poetic Creative Masterpiece?

btw that was very good

a reply to: Neith
Of course I did Neith it was your writing that generated my response.

originally posted by: Ophiuchus 13
a reply to: Neith
Of course

I did Neith it was your writing that generated my response.

Indeed, I know And I thank you for it!

You will know the Son by his Father's eyes,
And from the light in His eyes,
Through the Sun he will touch you Heart and Mind,
And tether your Soul.

His light will melt away the glacial walls,
And breach the Firmament above,
A Dawn of a Golden Age will rest on His wings,
And tribulations at His feet

a reply to: Geki09

That was brilliant, thank you.

Very well done Neith, you have perfect rhythm. Your name suggests knowledge of your topic.
Welcome back Lay.

a reply to: Neith

Yes...But did you like my Poetic Creative Masterpiece?

I know I did!

a reply to: WalkInSilence

Thank you I apprecitate your words greatly

WalkInSilence: I thank you too, greatly! Its really nice to be complimented now and then.

Cheers to All!