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posted on Nov, 13 2015 @ 01:16 PM
in a walnut shell
so many fragments of time became trapped
who could have known
repeat repeat repeat repeat repeat
over and over it forces a surrounding

who needs a clock

hesitated to bite into the apple
upon counted all the worms hole

the computer was a very sophisticated clock
it was a disappointing discovery

freedom means to have no shackles
every morning
don't forget to chain up your rabid dogs
or give away your poisons
it's normal to hate your neighbor now
it's normal to force your child to be addicted to your violence

he threw all these false totems away

if you need this to survive I'd rather die

the new being will feed on my soft tissues and make a musical instrument from the hollowed out bones

If what you hear is what you say
You say nothing

posted on Nov, 14 2015 @ 08:51 AM
a reply to: sociolpath

Wow. I really like this. I keep reading it. So many metaphors and I'm trying to figure out what you mean and I know when we write we have our own meaning in our head and others will interpret it differently. Anyway, thanks for sharing this. Awesome job at writing

posted on Nov, 15 2015 @ 12:58 PM
a reply to: natalia

If I cannot make sense of it I thought possibly metaphor would transmute the details, therefore give more understandable meaning.

posted on Nov, 15 2015 @ 03:01 PM
looking out of the broken window
heres an explanation of the field and trees outside
theres a lot of yellow

how about the frame that holds the glass?
all day long explaining voices what is seen
the exit doors location is approximate

but for some reason why

whats the difference inside or outside?

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