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Happiness (Poem)

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posted on Oct, 11 2015 @ 11:08 AM
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The best thing in life, is seeing your face.
Best feeling ever, is your warm embrace.

To give you a hug, always give me a smile.
Even after letting go, the smile holds for a while.

The soft toutch of your skin, makes my heart race.
The warmth of your heart, its always filled with grace.

Everything about you, make me clearly see,
You make me happy, the most I can ever be.
edit on 11-10-2015 by IndependentOpinion because: (no reason given)




posted on Oct, 11 2015 @ 11:19 AM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Awww, but just a quick note....you do not spell happiness that way...unless this is just creative license...carry on!



posted on Oct, 11 2015 @ 11:28 AM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

Sorry, English is not my first language, and I wrote this one on my mobile.



posted on Oct, 11 2015 @ 11:49 AM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

No worries...I have major OCD and just have to point out silly things.



posted on Oct, 11 2015 @ 12:18 PM
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a reply to: soulpowertothendegree

I understand. I get a mistake every time I post a Poem lol



posted on Oct, 11 2015 @ 05:25 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

don't worry about the mistakes - i can't write without mistakes either. it is a beautiful poem.

the nicest thing my ex said to me was that every time he thinks of me it still brings a smile to his face.




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