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Can You Follow This? (poem)

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posted on Oct, 6 2015 @ 07:52 AM
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Can You Follow This?


Let me tell you about my ADHD,
It's not as bad as it used to be.
I used to switch topics so very quick,
That no one could keep up with it.

Now I've learned to slow it down,
I don't do so much jumping around.
I jumped out of a plane once before,
After that, they wouldn't let me anymore.

But I swallowed a bug, on my way down,
I ate quite a few, before I was done.
Have you ever ate a bug before?
In my lifetime, I've ate roughly thirty or more.

Oh, I was talking about my ADHD,
And how I'm more focused, mentally.
How I've learned to stay on topic,
Have you ever been to the tropics?

I go there a few times a year...
I don't like the taste of beer.
I do like strawberry wine though,
I drank some a few days ago...

Err....

Let me tell you about my ADHD,
It's not as bad as it used to be.
I used to switch topics so very quick,
That no one could keep up with it.
Now I'm more focused, mentally,
And no one has problems following me....


Thanks,
blend57

(Don't click the box)



edit on 6-10-2015 by blend57 because: (no reason given)

edit on 6-10-2015 by blend57 because: added a few lines...I hate long lines..do you hate long lines?

edit on 6-10-2015 by blend57 because: Changed a line..I hate it when people change lines in the grocery store..like they are gonna get checked out faster..

edit on 6-10-2015 by blend57 because: I'm just editing to see how many words you can fit into the edit box. I wonder I could type a whole other poem in here. Probably not...although it is still letting me type, so..maybe. I never look at the reason for edit lines..now I'm going to because you never know what you will find in here. You might find a whole thread subject typed in here and if you don't look, you would never know. Unless the reason for edit line is so long that you have to notice it..then you would know.. I guess you can make this as long as you want to...and now I know..Fun with editing! Yay! another creative way to see if people are paying attention





posted on Oct, 6 2015 @ 08:02 AM
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a reply to: blend57

Hi blend,

I always enjoy your short poems and stories.

This one gave me a chuckle.

Thanks for that.

Hope your day goes well.



posted on Oct, 6 2015 @ 08:47 AM
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I'm paying attention! At least you would understand how my wife feels most of the time. And my mother. And my best friends. Hell, I guess anyone I've ever had a conversation with!




posted on Oct, 6 2015 @ 09:39 AM
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lol you're mad


I enjoyed that one though, kinda how my brain thinks



posted on Oct, 6 2015 @ 11:59 AM
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got ya!



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