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Beyond a thought

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posted on Jan, 28 2015 @ 08:10 PM
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Ummm...Hello again...please consider this selection from my work...


Perspective


I closed the cover gently on the light
Draped the stars where darkness held it's sway
Cycles call the arching reach of night
I solemn build the courses for each day

I plunge my fingers deep within the earth
Mold to each figurine it's part to play
So gentle pneuma lifts each form in birth
So animate where there was only clay

How I wonder that this scene could be
To step beyond a thought because I may
As eyelids open slow and newly see
I send them naked then upon their way


YouSir




posted on Jan, 28 2015 @ 08:32 PM
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a reply to: YouSir

Good one YouSir!




posted on Jan, 29 2015 @ 10:11 AM
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Good one




posted on Jan, 30 2015 @ 02:15 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat


Umm...Thank you Cagliostro...I like to attempt viewing things through the eye of otherness...although it can certainly falter into just another moribund vanity realization...




YouSir



posted on Jan, 30 2015 @ 02:19 PM
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a reply to: natalia


Ummm...Thank you Natalia...I'm glad you liked it...I was hoping I wouldn't freak out too many readers due to the obvious connotation...and that they would enjoy the study for what it was...




YouSir



posted on Mar, 19 2015 @ 12:11 PM
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a reply to: YouSir

I just read it again and it's really good yousir. Have you ever tried to publish your works or do you write as a release or do you just enjoy writing? Curious cat here in all



posted on Mar, 19 2015 @ 04:08 PM
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Ummm...Hello Natalia...Thank you for your kind words...I struggled for a long time (decades) about publishing...I actually have published some...The problem as I see it...is that I view talent and creativity as a gift and I feel strongly that I would be prostituting that gift if I were to seek enumeration for whatever is produced from it...
I finally made up my mind to place them here...in ATS...in the public domain...Although I do retain all rights to them...

Perhaps one day I will see things differently...Yet even then my hope is that even though I associate my real name to them and they are published...that they still are made available free to all that choose to view them...
These are the product of a gift...I would be remiss if I were to then sell them...I truly think that the enjoyment of the reader is payment enough...how could anyone ever need more than that I wonder...




YouSir




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