Comments Andros Colt: Chrononaut's Trumpets of War

Well I am up to doctor Gera in the story

Learning more over the characters from the franklin trust I do need feedback on the Tesla Institute for Higher Learning: War of the revisionist

Also have I left some open points

I am trying to keep in mind
its been three days

Bikers kill cops
with a teenagers help

Intro'd new COS people sperling and Ms. Sholoch

Operation Rebirth
plan started by five year olds being executed

first love versus fate

Leetas intro i handled differently

i am also handling Austin and Andros differently

the concept of a soul
leeta native tongue is soul speak

while it sounds funny
soul sniffing


The last concept is based on some simple facts
Two neurons connect the nasal olfactory sense to the brain

different species different ways of processing information

leetas people see auras true
but the vibrations of soul speak are the equivalent inher people

little selina
the yeti evolved differently.. smell the aura not see it

hope for comments on it