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posted on Apr, 19 2014 @ 03:35 PM
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A nice observance.
Observing the universe as a profession.
Look at everything,
leave no stone unturned.
Shining brightly.
Being attached to nothing.
Being at one...
Eventually.
As a matter of course.
The mind of the universe,
Is your physical reality.
You see those images...
Mocking you.
Stick with it.
You are royalty.
You understand,
The subtlety that is the universe.
Destroying a universe...
That is full of meaning.
Nothing is off limits.
Don't suppress.
Know a thing.
Learn.
You understand.
Lasting.
It keeps.
What is this?
An orange.




posted on Apr, 19 2014 @ 03:41 PM
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That's pretty deep...I like it.



posted on Apr, 19 2014 @ 03:43 PM
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a reply to: Nikola014

Thanks. I appreciate it.



posted on Apr, 20 2014 @ 02:36 PM
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a reply to: brazenalderpadrescorpio
Thanks for sharing your work on here.
I enjoy



posted on Apr, 20 2014 @ 03:35 PM
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a reply to: natalia

I like your work too, Natalia! I always star and flag your poems.



posted on Apr, 22 2014 @ 02:33 AM
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a reply to: brazenalderpadrescorpio

I also like your work. Very nice. Not sure how i missed this one. My Ats has been playing up with missing forums and jesse ventura faces urrggg!!...All seems normal now. Keep them coming



posted on Apr, 22 2014 @ 10:44 AM
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a reply to: TheDoctor46

Lol. Thanks. Since I'm on my old iPad I don't see Jesse Ventura's face. I'm not sure if it's good or bad. Haha.



posted on Apr, 25 2014 @ 09:45 PM
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a reply to: brazenalderpadrescorpio

After reading this, I feel high praise at you complimenting me!

I could never write like this because, perhaps going to school in a small town, I always fall back to making my prose rhyme no matter the consequence to the poem itself. It's an irritation that I simply can't overcome.

So anyway, than ks again and I really liked this. Going to scour your history for more lol



posted on Apr, 25 2014 @ 10:07 PM
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a reply to: mymymy

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. It seems that I have the opposite problem. Growing up in urban communities most of life, I tend to want to make my art a little bit stranger. My favorite type of music is electronic music, for example. But there's no such thing as right and wrong. I'm being serious when I say that you're a good writer, too. Keep honing your craft.




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