What's The Point?, page 1

posted on Jan, 16 2014 @ 06:29 PM

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What's the point?
No one cares.
All alone.
Unawares.
Broken, bloodied.
Wracked and torn.
What's the point?
No one's there.
All alone.
lost, but where?
Sobbing, bruised.
Wrenched and worn.
What's the point?
We are all alone.

TheDoctor46

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 10:10 AM

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Nice one I like that poem. Short and to the point...Just hope you don't feel this way though

..Star and flag for you

CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 06:20 PM

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reply to post by TheDoctor46

Thanks, glad you liked it.

No, I don't, not always at least. My poetry had always been on the darker side. I've shared a few on here in the past. I don't know, some writers use a lot of emotion when writing poems, for me it's more spontaneous.

Quarles

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 06:48 PM

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We need a poetry contest on here.

Good job!

CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 07:04 PM

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reply to post by Quarles

Thank you!

I would enter. I entered the last one I seen posted but didn't do so well. Really I just enjoy writing and am thankful for the opportunity to share with such fine individuals!

Quarles

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 07:07 PM

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reply to post by CagliostroTheGreat

I would enter, too.

I enjoy writing poetry. I tried my hand at a couple of short stories in the latest contest. They were my first attempts at writing that other people will see...lol. I'll just have to wait and see how I do.

CagliostroTheGreat

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 07:19 PM

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My thing with the short story contests is its hard for me to constrain myself like that. I dunno mostly psychological probably but every time I try I get slammed with a ten ton writers block.

Quarles

posted on Jan, 17 2014 @ 07:25 PM

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reply to post by CagliostroTheGreat

LOL. I know the problem. I get that way. That's why it took so long to come up with a second story.