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A Witches spell: All hallows eve, A beckoning to sleep [D&G]

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posted on Oct, 30 2011 @ 10:27 PM
[color=F88017]A Witches spell: All hallows eve, A beckoning to sleep
By Whateva69

I cast thy runes in the pit under the moon.
They scatter accordingly… addressed to the foulness stench and ghastly ghouls.

Tonight I slither into your thoughts as darkness smothers all who lurk.
While you slumber into the depths… your conscious is left to those who weep.

As you shift...your awareness...into sleep… thy ghouls and ghostly outcasts creep.

Listen clearly now… as thy words reach you, softly sweeping the night to caress you, sleep thy child, rest thy head for the darkness calls you off to bed.

Your limbs are stiff you cannot move, Slip into the darkness and open your soul.

Creep forward shadows… and…the ghostly, for the child now sleeps… and can be easily forsaken.

edit on 30/10/11 by Whateva69 because: oops

posted on Oct, 30 2011 @ 11:31 PM
And what a blessing it is to be manifest here in 3 dimensional form, in this 'time'.

I very much am looking forward to the harvest of all the bastardizations of existence, at least influencing us here.


edit on 30-10-2011 by xacto because: (no reason given)

posted on Oct, 30 2011 @ 11:49 PM
reply to post by xacto

Oh grow up, it’s a fantasy piece.

Would you rather I change the witch to a Satanist worshiper or maybe voodoo queen? Make the witch a common house wife and the child a husband 

posted on Oct, 31 2011 @ 12:36 AM
Very good and thought-provoking.
Perhaps a reminder of our macabre archetypal fear that only a frail, child-like conscience separates us from the unknown, and that sleep was once considered the "small death".

I'm also faintly reminded of Goethe's poem "The Erl King":

posted on Oct, 31 2011 @ 01:14 AM
reply to post by halfoldman

OMG that is fantastic, i did not know about this story, i liked how he witnessed a father carrying his child off in the night to doctors.
Then to put himself as the child and imagining what the child might have been going through.

Thankyou for taking the time to read my little piece. and thank you for the link, i loved it.

posted on Oct, 31 2011 @ 08:17 AM
Beautifully written, Enjoyed it, S@F for you from me, Happy Halloween.

posted on Oct, 31 2011 @ 04:02 PM
reply to post by antar

Hey antar /wave /hug

You have no idea what your comment means to me, it’s an honour to have you read and enjoy this little spell piece.

Love and Harmony
Whateva x x x

posted on Oct, 31 2011 @ 10:33 PM
Very good job. Star from me

Good luck and thanks for stopping by and reading mine!!!

posted on Nov, 1 2011 @ 07:23 AM
reply to post by ldyserenity

Hello there

I liked your story too

I still have a few more to read and I’m waiting for the to be continued ones to be updated so I can S&f them. There are some good works floating around.

posted on Nov, 1 2011 @ 05:36 PM
Nicely done Whateva.
Good luck with the competition

posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 04:22 PM
Great job! Really enjoyed reading this one. S&F

posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 08:40 PM
reply to post by Whateva69

To me, this is art with words ! Beautifully written !!

A well deserved S&F !!

posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 09:27 PM
The art work is beautiful; I did forget to add a thank you to the artists who’s created them.
As I found them just by searching the net, if anyone knows whose work this is, let me know and I’ll give the full credit and links to their web sites.

love and harmony

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