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Poetic Death

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posted on Jan, 21 2011 @ 04:50 PM
A subject we all know too dear,
Future pain we must all feel.
Sorrow and fear oh so near,
Death by-god has come here.

We lay a flower on the grave,
Watching whilst it too is taken away.
Gentle breeze washing through,
Joy and sunshine so-far removed.

For the brightest light appears dim,
Death we know has already been.
Taken away a body of love,
Nothing remains to hug.

Bringing the strongest man to his knees,
Beginning and pleading to let him leave.
Alone in his silence,
Broken and peeved.

Death cometh as it will,
Behind is left a path of hell.
For no cry, plead, desire, or prayer,
Can bring your loved one back from there.

Just a short poem I wrote. I know it seems dark but it’s not intended to be. Struck with an urge to write about death I just jotted this down.

Well hope you… enjoy?
edit on 1/21/2011 by Misoir because: (no reason given)

posted on Jan, 21 2011 @ 05:19 PM
Pure brilliance!

I wish more people on ATS had a heart like this.

Bravo SIR, BRAVO!!!!!!

Great writing

posted on Jan, 21 2011 @ 05:34 PM
Awesome Misoir, well done and well said.

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