CERN Opens Portal into Man's Head

Some of you guys have probably seen my threads in other forums on ATS, where I go to different places around where I live and show what they look like. The videos are nothing special and I don't really make any money from them, I just do it as a hobby. I noticed a lot of people were making introduction videos for their youtube channel and I decided to write a short story and make a video to explain my channel. I'm not posting this so you'll subscribe or anything like that, I really just wanted to show you the story that I came up with and see what you guys think about it. I know some of the technical facts are probably wrong, but I'm not really a scientist.



(mods, I wasn't sure where to put this. . . in the writing forum or here, please move it if you think it belongs somewhere else. Thanks)

a reply to: esteay812

First impression after 10 seconds in: that robotic voice...No
Personally I find it irritating when videos go that method.
You should use your own voice. just IMO

You should really consider adding a disclaimer that this is purely science fiction. You may get more hits that way because at first I thought this was total BS and a waste of my time. Now that I know that it is SF then I seem to be more interested to be honest.

a reply to: Macenroe82

Yes, that too. No robot voice!!

Cool... have the biggest toys, get the Victoria Secret Girls to work them..... win-win....

a reply to: Macenroe82

I generally don't like the robots, but it kinda serves it's purpose here. I mean, I'm not a woman and I wanted to use a woman's voice, then I also wanted it to seem a little like the person talking isn't actually a person, but an A.I. that was being used to run the experiments.

a reply to: HawkeyeNation

I thought about that, but that's why I posted in the Gray Area. . . or do you mean in the video? That may be a good idea. I tried to make the title seem ridiculous and then used a thumbnail that was not really scientific. I also added in the description it's an "origin" story. I should probably write something up to make it absolutely clear it's sf and for comedy only.

How are those hawkeyes doing? You guys had a great year after we played in the bowl game a couple seasons ago. Hopefully the Vols can finally have an above average season.

a reply to: esteay812

Not bad for sci-fi.

I usually can't watch the robot voice unless its Anonymous or something like that but I get your reasoning now.

a reply to: esteay812

I noticed a lot of people were making introduction videos for their youtube channel and I decided to write a short story and make a video to explain my channel.

I have not noticed that from a lot of people.

I'm not posting this so you'll subscribe or anything like that

Ok, it's a deal.

a reply to: butcherguy

Haha, right on butcher.

originally posted by: Macenroe82
a reply to: esteay812

First impression after 10 seconds in: that robotic voice...No
Personally I find it irritating when videos go that method.
You should use your own voice. just IMO

Hotties and cern ! Who could resist?

a reply to: esteay812

Sadly, It will just end up being John Malkovich.

Capgras delusion is a psychiatric disorder in which a person holds a delusion that a friend, spouse, parent, or other close family member (or pet) has been replaced by an identical impostor. The Capgras delusion is classified as a delusional misidentification syndrome, a class of delusional beliefs that involves the misidentification of people, places, or objects.[2] It can occur in acute, transient, or chronic forms. Cases in which patients hold the belief that time has been "warped" or "substituted" have also been reported.[3]

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Don't know why but I had to post it here (this is Earth 19 isn't it ?) I love watching the Tales of the Invisible Redneck.

Lord, let it not be AugustusMasonicus or we're all doomed. We'll all be slowly drowned in barrels of liquor by ladies in leather.

Wait.....Please let it be A.M.

a reply to: esteay812

Robovoice = instaNOPE!

a reply to: DAVID64

Now you mention it, I've been getting a funny vibratey feeling in my head just lately and I swear someone's watching me!!!

originally posted by: DAVID64
Lord, let it not be AugustusMasonicus or we're all doomed. We'll all be slowly drowned in barrels of liquor by ladies in leather.

Wait.....Please let it be A.M.

"Pricks up ears"

a reply to: esteay812

After my glib comment earlier I thought it only fair to come back for a second viewing and it is quite an intriguing concept.
One criticism is all the slow zoom ins on the static pics made me feel slightly queezy.
I'm on my phone now but I'll find you on the Toob sometime and check out your other stuff.
Cheers.

originally posted by: randyvs

originally posted by: Macenroe82
a reply to: esteay812

First impression after 10 seconds in: that robotic voice...No
Personally I find it irritating when videos go that method.
You should use your own voice. just IMO

Hotties and cern ! Who could resist?

I did not play the video, I figured the hottie would disappear if I did.

a reply to: butcherguy

Shes in it again later.
By the way. She looks like an ex of mine.
That's not a boast.
She was a spectacularly unpleasant personality!