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The Yellow Tree...

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posted on Apr, 4 2016 @ 01:06 PM
Marci and Jon were living on planet Earth, the year was 1756. Marci and Jon kept a big secret from all of their friends. Jon was a metal shop owner. People would come into his store to have items made into metal. For example, a person would stop in to have their favorite shoe turned in to a metal shoe.

Marci owned a specialty dress and hat shop. Marci made dresses and hats to fit. For example if a large women stopped in, Marci would make a custom dress to fit, along with a hat. A skinny girl with long flowing arms could stop in for a custom dress and a long skinny hat that would cover her ears.

Large companies would hire Jon to make parts that no one else could come close to making. Jons metal parts were so well made he won a international award. A company would give Jon a new idea for a machine, no problem, Jon had it designed, layed out and complete in less then a week. No one could figure out how Jon could do all this work and planing with such little time.

Marci on the other hand also had a secret. All her dresses she made had a special device. A device that she would implant into the dresses.
Her device could track the women,listen to words they spoke. She could even pick up on her thoughts.

Jon and Marci lived a Modest life. A normal house on the outskirts of the big city. A donkey and a modest wheeled cart to take them places, like work or to a park. Back in 1756 there were no cars. Just horse and carts.

Companies from all over the world traveled to Jons shop to have parts created. Within a week as promised all the amazing parts we complete, put on coal burning ships and sent to the companies that ordered the amazing products.

Another big company came to Jon with a order of 100,000 metal inner pieces for a watch. The owner told John, I need this order within 30 days. Jon said"no problem". The owner was shocked. Another company he went to told him it would take over a year to produce 100,000 watch parts with 20 men working 10 hours per day.

Jon went to the back of his shop pressed a few buttons. Within 4 hours the watch components were complete. He shiped off the parts to the watch maker the next day. The man came to Jon a week later with the payment and another order.

As it turns out Jon and Mindy were time travelers from the year 2612. Jon had hundreds or robots and hign tech computers runing his company...The End[color=Teal
edit on 4 4 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

posted on Apr, 4 2016 @ 08:42 PM
a reply to: Quantum12

Interesting twist!

Wouldn't THAT be something?

They would be the most famous/idolized people of their time.

posted on Apr, 4 2016 @ 09:48 PM
a reply to: TNMockingbird

LOL you got the point of the story. I kindly thank you for reading my short story!!!

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