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Hey You (poem)

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posted on Nov, 9 2015 @ 06:44 AM

Hey You

Hey you, are you listening to me?
I'm sharing my thoughts with you.
However simple or complex they may be,
You still might find something useful.

A point of reflection, a new perspective,
Something worthy to build upon,
Within every word I choose to give,
It's the thought that I hope carries on.

Hey, mister, you reading my words?
Or giving them a quick once through,
It's not that I have a need to be heard,
I'm just wondering what it is you do.

Sitting there, looking through threads,
On the other side of the computer screen.
I wonder what goes through your head,
If you read what I write and get what I mean.

Hey, kind sir, thank you for stopping in,
Taking a few moments from your day.
To read my stories and poems and then,
Leave some thoughts about what I say.


edit on 9-11-2015 by blend57 because: (no reason given)

posted on Nov, 9 2015 @ 06:52 AM
a reply to: blend57

Every time

posted on Nov, 9 2015 @ 11:51 AM
I'm always reading your words and often find myself feeling an intertwining of worlds running parallel. You always have my mind and emotions too, opening to becoming a better person. Thank you!

posted on Nov, 9 2015 @ 12:09 PM
Your poetry is a marvel in the transition of the Prodigal Path. May they be herald by the sound of trumpets and beating feathers.

Keep up the good work.

posted on Nov, 9 2015 @ 02:46 PM
I enjoy your poems!

posted on Nov, 9 2015 @ 04:33 PM
a reply to: blend57

I enjoy your poems too blend.

Sometimes I don't understand them. But some of them really touch me and make me think.

And sometimes they make me cry.

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