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Imagine the magic

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posted on Sep, 5 2015 @ 07:27 AM
Imagine the magic;
if most were emphatic.
How come then.....? Everything is just truly a tragic.

When most deeds are selfish;
for the reason you are helpless.
Why should other suffer;
because "you" only think of your brothers...

When you are a relic;
you forget the angelic;
and it all becomes some what; really, really, really truly.... Pathetic.

You act as a father;
but denounce your very own daughter.
Well now.....
You just let people drown in the water;
and all i hear, i want them to return to the slaughter....

Im trying to grasp how to write a poem, critic will be appreciated.

posted on Sep, 5 2015 @ 11:34 AM
Empathetic is a different word than emphatic.

posted on Sep, 5 2015 @ 12:06 PM
a reply to: kenzohattori69

? It is?

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