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Eyes wide open*

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posted on Jul, 24 2014 @ 11:26 AM
Hey yo dj... Bust a beat... As ya flow

Don't speak this poem.. Flow it out in a hip hop rhyme..

Can't sleep
Can't eat
Can't think
Eyes wide open
Can't blink
Stop... Listen
Water glistens
Drink it down
Don't you frown
Play music
Turn it loud
Dance it out
Show you're proud
Flip around
Move about
Shake ya bum
Yell a shout
Spin a twirl
Fake that leap
Actin dead
Still can't sleep
Heart pumpin
Body jumpin
Whistle workin
Stop yo lurkin
Have some fun
Join in
Make it jump
I see ya grin
Take my hand
Let's stand
Start movin
Arms a' groovin
Moves improvin
Clothes removin
Gettin hot
Cool it off
Sip a shot
Don't cough
Take care
Breathin air
Keep the flow
Gotta go

Peace and love
~nat the blue eyed cat~

posted on Jul, 28 2014 @ 07:45 PM
a reply to: natalia

deep breath...start again

posted on Jul, 29 2014 @ 03:17 AM
a reply to: natalia

Did a little dance to this one!

posted on Jul, 30 2014 @ 08:43 PM
a reply to: grayeagle

That's awesome .. Thanks for sharing that friend

posted on Jul, 30 2014 @ 08:44 PM
a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

That's great ! I'm trying so hard to write positive ..but I'll tell ya.. When things keep happening.. It's hard ..

posted on Jul, 30 2014 @ 08:45 PM
How you act
How you feel
Don't change
Too real
Sit down
Jump high
Act a fool
Don't you sigh
Step forward
Step back
Gotcha tongue
Talkin smack
Pay attention
That's a fact
Stay true
Don't retract
In tune
Sinkin down
Lift it up
Roll around
Take it in
Find your place
Stand tall
With no face
Almost done
Head below
Find a reason
To go slow
Look direct
Don't lie
Phased out
Still try
Takin notes
Drawin names
Stay calm
Curious games
Shake it off
Brightly cool
Gaze straight
No ones fool
Scream and shout
Hide away
Carry on
Present stays

posted on Jun, 29 2021 @ 04:00 PM
a reply to: natalia

Oh man
I need to put my head through a brain scan
Hey hey
No way
It wouldnt make a difference to me anyway
Got fired
Need to get the brain cells re-wired
Real eyes
Real eyes realise real lies.

The End.
You got writing skills Cat, im telling you. That was goddamn deadly both the first one and the second one. Deadly the two of them. Really really good. Impressive.

posted on Aug, 29 2021 @ 07:46 PM
a reply to: natalia

This reminded me of really good spoken word - and it works very well on the screen, too.

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