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posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 03:30 PM
We’re CREATED then born
manifestations generated
from the surrounding norm

we try to perceive and as
we understand more we believe

we’re taught and learn
so we look beyond and yearn

for what is considered objectively
to be recognized as TRUTH reality

at times mistakes are made
as the eternal experiences or paths are laid

from these mistakes the Soul/Spirit/Internal Energy evolves
not to be stuck down as we FALL

we get up same CREATED Souls/Spirits/Internal Energies born again
maybe next manifestation well get it right AN begin to Ascend…


posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 03:58 PM
a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

I like the last stanza. Good poem!

posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 05:03 PM
a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

We do not need to reincarnate in order to ascend
We can embrace The Holy Spirit to become born again
Transforming wrath and pride to love for righteousness from sin
With a thirst for peace for self and all the journey will begin

God is The Beginning but God is also The End
An eternity of Peace and Love the absence of all sin
If we believe a wrathful God of jealousy and sin
Then we will live in confusion without the Love from Him
edit on 29-4-2014 by arpgme because: (no reason given)

posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 06:28 PM
a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

Beautiful poem. I only have one thing to add and that might be a change in the title.

Eternia is the place where He-Man comes from. He fights for the defense of Eternia against Skeletor. Other than that, great poem.

posted on Apr, 29 2014 @ 07:09 PM
a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

I like that first stanza. You started it off perfectly.

posted on Apr, 30 2014 @ 06:24 AM
a reply to: brazenalderpadrescorpio
Thank you brazenalderpadrescorpio, 1 is happy you enjoyed the share

a reply to: arpgme
Beautiful poetic share arpgme, thanks for the addition to the thread. 1 understands the logic and the message within

a reply to: Cuervo
yes I remember he-man Cuervo
perhaps there was some subliminal messages in the toons back then, and knowing is half the battle... Good observation 1 is happy you enjoyed the read. To 1 its all associated with Eternal Existing learning and progressing on past mistakes made during the experiences within the Life and Death phases within EXISTENCE which then increases Soul-Spirit-Internal ENERGY integrity overall to 1, thanks for taking time to add input to the thread.

a reply to: Astrocyte

1 is appreciative for you taking time to read the poetic share Astrocyte, and happy that you enjoyed the read… The share is compiled from my subjective analysis of EXISTENCE and the many realities that are manifested within it, all based of off different perspectives generated from the perceptions of the many CREATOR Creations co-existing who make up the WHOLE* or “WE”

If "WE" is more acknowledged by many deleting the boundaries which segregate us, then maybe the response eventually will be why? harm /war /deceive / hate thyself overall if "WE" are "WE"...

Please feel free to add on any poems they are all welcome and thanks again ALL*…


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