I have no face

I have no face
I have no hands
I am a mockery
To all of man

I see no form
I have no right
I am not trusted
I lack a sight

I try to stand
I fall back down
I am not in control
I am bound

I am not open
I fight myself
I push away
I see no success

I have no mind
I am not tall
I cannot continue
I hate to fall

I long for nothing
I long for everything
I try to see
I fail forgetting

I want to hide
I put on my mask
I cower down
I am off task

I am off key
I stay too mixed
I have an ending
I will be fixed



Peace and love
-nat the blue eyed cat-

a reply to: natalia

You don't need fixed
You're good enough.
But I love to read
Your poems and stuff

To lose face is an ancient expression, not just of status but loosing one's face is to lose one's spirit or the face of our dancing mask, loosing the right to incarnate a spirit and wear one's totem to which you have captured most interestingly in your writing!

originally posted by: beansidhe
a reply to: natalia

You don't need fixed
You're good enough.
But I love to read
Your poems and stuff

Aww.. Thanks

originally posted by: abeverage
To lose face is an ancient expression, not just of status but loosing one's face is to lose one's spirit or the face of our dancing mask, loosing the right to incarnate a spirit and wear one's totem to which you have captured most interestingly in your writing!

Hmm... That's interesting and neat!
Thanks for that lil tid bit of info.

a reply to: natalia
Pretty dark mood of late...
This reminds me of a song by Robert Plant & Alison Kraus
"Nothin'"


If it starts getting too dark...please let us know.
Some of us may have tasted that, too.