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Stop it. You are going to make me cry. S&F
*sniff*
No. It's nothing. Just got something stuck in my eye... M'fine. Really.
abeverage
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Stop it. You are going to make me cry. S&F
*sniff*
No. It's nothing. Just got something stuck in my eye... M'fine. Really.
Poems should evoke emotion, otherwise they are just words...
natalia
reply to post by abeverage
That was really good my friend. I enjoyed the read although a bit sad. I hope you continue to write. You have talent *thumbs up*
natalia
reply to post by abeverage
Maybe I shouldn't have used the word 'bit'. It was an emotionally sad poem. At first it was happy and he was free...then he was called names and beaten down physically and mentally...I did tear up, I guess I should have mentioned that. I felt really sorry for him and the girl who had lost her wings too...and it just hit close to home I guess. Words can bring you down when you are flying high.
Thanks for sharing it. I wrote a dark poem the other day but not sure if I wanna share yet
Good day to you friend.edit on 16-9-2013 by natalia because: Added
Logos23
reply to post by abeverage
Not only did I read it all the way through but I read it more than once lol
But seriously....that was as beautiful as it was sad.I suspect I will find it very haunting long after I have read it. It say's much about the human condition.
Thank you for sharing it.