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Originally posted by TheLieWeLive
Very good. A lot of emotion. Great choice of speech and music blending.
I really didn't wanna mention it but "Business" is misspelled in the very beginning. Sorry it just jumped out at me.
Originally posted by Forevever
Brilliant work OP, very awesome - I am impressed I've heard/seen that speech but you did a great job expressing the message through imagery. Did you get an A?
Originally posted by TheLieWeLive
Very good. A lot of emotion. Great choice of speech and music blending.
I really didn't wanna mention it but "Business" is misspelled in the very beginning. Sorry it just jumped out at me.
LOL I missed that one, but I wasn't reading right away. I did see the OP spelled "torture" as "torcher" - I definitely wanted to mention it but wasn't sure how to bring it up I just thought it was amusing :X It did not distract from the overall excellence of the piece. Again, nice work OP!