Reikuro's Poems

Here are my poems...usually different then normal poems, very dark usually but if I take out all my dark feelings in my poems, that way I'm not depressed all day

Here is one I wrote trying to make something like a poem we read in french today...and I was bored...not much of a rhyme scheme...just...read it



She sat on the cliff
Cried to the night

She sat and recalled
that horrible sight

Wanting him to be there

She sat and sighed
hoped the doctor had lied

She sat and cried
knowing he had died

Wanting him to be there

She wanted to die
had no strength to try
sat there and cried
sat there and lied

She told herself he would come back
She told herself the doctor made a mistake

she felt a hand on her shoulder
she turned around suddenly feeling less colder

She saw his face

the doctor had made a mistake
the doctor had lied
He hadn't died

poems I wrote for school thingy...Poetry Cafe in LA class (Language Arts)

heres one

My Dream

I had a dream
Where the stars where black
the moon was gold
and the sun a shinning silver

I had a dream
where the rivers sang
and the trees danced
to the beat of the wind

I had a dream
where the howling of the wolves
and the singing of the raven
joined in the song

I had a dream
where the stars were black
nature made the song
and the wild joined together



They wanted me to write a somewhat happy one so I did

Excellent poems! well written,

I feel you have a gift in the making

Nice poem reik, I want more...

wow! excellent, especially the first one!
The end was slightly dissapointing though, more pain would have made it much cooler, the guy should have died!
Anyways, hats off to you!!

IAF

Your writting's great! Keep it up!