Mirrors

The light in your eyes is fading fast,
No where to go now no where to hide
I see you like I see a mirror.

Refracting light, it's never right
Watching closely, a dying sun
Soon ... soon oh so soon.

Emptiness, amongst fallen dead
Dying jesters, fallen sons
Nothing here to see, it's done.

a reply to: Neith

That's deep-sounds like Shakespeare. You have a good feel for words describing something very personal.

originally posted by: Justso
a reply to: Neith

That's deep-sounds like Shakespeare. You have a good feel for words describing something very personal.

Thank you so much Justso, I never mentioned this before but I'm grateful to you for your input, you're a real sweetie!

Sister!

a reply to: Neith

I love your writing!

originally posted by: Justso
a reply to: Neith

I love your writing!

Thank you kind soul. Your words are most appreciated.

a reply to: Neith

Deep and thought provoking.
As always, a pleasure to read your writings.

originally posted by: TNMockingbird
a reply to: Neith

Deep and thought provoking.
As always, a pleasure to read your writings.

Thank you, I always enjoy your replies to my threads!