She sees..., page 1

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 11:43 AM

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Over the dark red waters was the green sand of life. We made our way along shore 7. As we approached I could feel it. I have waited for this moment in time for 343 years.

Here it comes the gush of this land I been seeking my entire life. With moments like this i can never drift. This world awaits me. This time I will do it right.

As I breath I smell beautiful roses and hay. I took the oath, the oath of new life. A form of time I cannot explain. It will not be the same as last time.

I am feeling it again something is pushing and pushing oh now it is me they see.

My birth was a day I will never forget. Thank you Dr. Rebirt. I love you mommy...The end

edit on 4 5 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

peppycat

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 04:05 PM

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a reply to: Quantum12 I really love this snippet of a world, it seems like really good bit of Sci-Fi and I want more of this story!😊

Quantum12

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 04:38 PM

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a reply to: peppycat

Thank you again kindly for reading my story. Your new story is amazing!

King Seesar

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 05:40 PM

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Good story man, i write some, sometimes also.

Quantum12

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 05:45 PM

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a reply to: King Seesar
Thank you for the nice words. I will go find your story now!

tadaman

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 05:45 PM

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a reply to: Quantum12

That was one of your best so far.

Formidable.

Quantum12

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 05:53 PM

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a reply to: tadaman

Thank you, tadaman! I am waiting your your next story!

DersonFed

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 06:04 PM

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a reply to: Quantum12

Good story, i could tell this had deep meaning for you, bravo.

Quantum12

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 06:12 PM

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a reply to: DersonFed
Thank you kindly. The story was about a baby being reborn to this world. She was waiting in the timeline for a rebirth

BaldPete

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 06:12 PM

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a reply to: Quantum12

Did the oath mean being loved, cause love is the most important thing in life

Much Love and Care - Bald Pete

Quantum12

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 06:16 PM

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a reply to: BaldPete

I agree love is important. The oath she took was to be a better person. Her last life he yes he murdered people and was given another chance at life.

BaldPete

posted on Apr, 5 2016 @ 06:17 PM

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a reply to: Quantum12

I believe Christ is the only one we need, if only more found faith in him.

Christ shows love to everyone - Bald Pete