Clementine

Tell Clementine with a wariness breath

I prefer to hide without a regret

A whisper of comfort is heard behind one ear

Sorrow is sensed as I say be a dear

Rumble of thunder straight up my spine

Peeking out the glass of these eyes of mine

Greediest grin yearns to be seen

Wicked stare flowing emerald green

Clem prides her stride however she pleases

Curiosity plus mischief never ceases

Rippling red hair declines moral rules

Gambling roulette among simple fools

Clementines a weakness I clearly see

Power to exceed is all up to me

Glimpse far beyond the mesmerized glass

I shall emerge, presently....at last

peace and love
~nat the blue eyed cat~

Seriously... wow.

Thank you for that

Please keep it up and don't stop writing

Hey Nat, I love your style

Keep up the creative work.

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Nicely done, Nat.

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I just read that out loud to a room half-full of people, you got an enthusiastic round of applause! One listener (a musician) says he was hearing music in the words. He said it would make a great song. s&f!!

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Say whaaaa!!??
That is awesome!! My cousin writes songs and he asks me for help sometimes..

That is pretty radical friend You just made my night, I have been holding onto that poem for awhile now.
Another lady that shares her poetry told me I should share more...so I went for it.

Thanks for your kind words..they mean a lot.

~nat

Everyone else. You guys are really nice and I appreciate the nice words
~nat

Very nice indeed Nat, She sure is a beauty, A temptress. Keep up the good work

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Thanks doc.

She is a temptress indeed.
-nat

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Hope you don't mind Nat

I was messing around with my guitar and thought it might be fun to put some chords to it.

It came out very Pink Floyd

I was amazed.

What a great way to wind down after a frustrating day

Thanks My headache is gone, my shoulders are relaxed and Mrs C has come out from behind the couch

Cody

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That's awesome Cody
Pink Floyd is a band I grew up listening to and enjoyed them and still enjoy them so much!!

That's cool your headache went away..now take my headache away as well

-nat

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Originally posted by natalia
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That's awesome Cody

Pink Floyd is a band I grew up listening to and enjoyed them and still enjoy them so much!!

That's cool your headache went away..now take my headache away as well

-nat

Here you go



Cody

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Natalia, How beautiful in every way! I try and make sure I never miss a rendering of yours...Talented lady, you are! I can't seem to write lately. I had a few things here for a while but have kinda run dry on thoughts/feelings/ideas.

One cool thingy, Your latest avatar...my black angel also has 2 ravens in the scene but when I put it up alls I got was the angel...some size issue I guess with the pic. In actuality, my angel is looking down at the snow at 2 ravens but they don't show in the avatar. I thought it was kinda neat....your angel and 2 ravens and what a coincidence, mine has 2 ravens also...just, no one can see them. We are on the same wave length sometimes perchance.

Originally posted by shrevegal
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Hey, Thanks!

writing sure can come and go when it pleases that's for sure. Thank you for taking the time out to read it. Yours are always so good I sure would like to read more, but I understand, sometimes we get blocked.
Are ravens and crows the same, I really like how a crow caws. I think it sounds neat

And if you need help with sizing of your avatar, visit this page, and throw the picture up as a reply and someone should be able to size your avatar correctly to where you can see the ravens

www.abovetopsecret.com...

Coincidences don't happen

and I'm sure we can be on the same wavelength at more times than we know.
-nat

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You got a handle on that one . Cheers 1%