I wish i'd had a mirror

Three friends sat at the table
Strong drink was the staple
One was very drunk and talked a lot of lies
His monstrous incoherent rambling filled the skies
Another sitting there listening , saw with new eyes
A new reality dawned to her friends features
And they became like vultures , demon creatures
And seeing for the first time
She looked into her mates eyes
For then she knew , she was one too
Ha , he laughed , look at you.
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reply to post by my1percent


Wow friend. That was good. good job.
Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed.
-nat

reply to post by natalia


Thanks, nat . It's a bit dark , but all life aspects can be covered. Cheers 1%

reply to post by my1percent


I feel my dark poetry is some of my best.
It comes from deep within. This one was deep to me
-nat