"May I leave?"[APWC]

"May I leave?"


I keep asking myself every day. I feel old, as If my very soul,
is bereft of the very possibility. I can sense the daylight, the air,
the known ability's, I possess.

This Journey, I have burnt into my psyche,feels.......right.
But the constant gnawing, and hunger to be free, posses me, like...

I don't know. There is no way to describe it. Instinct, Karma.
I have this dream of being something else.What I was, and what I am....

An enigma.

Oh... even those questions, cant break this feeling to be free. I must leave !



I MUST !


It is time..........

reply to post by sonnny1


How the hell is this not flagged!?!?!!

S&F thank you!

reply to post by CompisMentis


Why thank you......for the kind words.



Its late, for most of the United States. Maybe the majority of writers, are sleeping comfortably.......


Hopefully, in the morning, They will get a chance to read it.


Peace.

got a sense of Claustrophobia reading then scrolled down to read replies and saw the pic, good job Sonny

reply to post by rebellender




My youngest daughter loved the story. She didnt know what it was about, until she saw the pic, actually.........

She loves butterflies, and started drawing them, and writing her own story, about them.

Just a lil' bump. Great story, I like to look at life from the perspective of other life forms

reply to post by Iamschist


Thank you for the bump.........



Actually, I didnt write this for the contest, per say....
Sheer Pleasure, of writing, and I was inspired by this Story.

The Lost Soul [APWC]

This story, has my vote, if I had one, for giving me the Inspiration.

reply to post by sonnny1


Wow, thank you for reading and enjoying my story. I'm glad it inspired you to write your own, which I enjoyed equally.

reply to post by DAZ21


You wrote yours superbly.

I honestly think yours should win this contest, actually.

Thank you for reading mine.......

"The Monarch Butterfly, a lordly thing,
so proud of flight, and fair of wing."

SnF. However brief, you nailed the essence of growing into a new stage of life.

reply to post by Druid42


Thank You Druid.

I found this to be charming.

I gave you a star and a flag.

Use them wisely

reply to post by SLAYER69




will do!

Thank You, BTW..