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Among the living (poem)

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posted on Jul, 25 2011 @ 02:53 AM
Among the living:

I cannot yet put words on paper
that describe what I want to say.
Emotions are so random, still
not held together by my thoughts.
One day,
I'll write you a beautiful poem,
when my heart lives again...
and I learned to 'feel' once more...

In recent nights, when I reached out,
and shared a handful of tears,
a sudden peace came over me,
telling me that you know it all.
Now you know it all:
the silly little things I crave for,
the truth behind my truth.

You whispered...

The importance of living
among the living.

to my brother
15-02-1979 - 16-06-2007

posted on Jul, 25 2011 @ 03:37 AM
Is this poem about mental disorder?

posted on Jul, 25 2011 @ 03:44 AM

Originally posted by Nomzy
Is this poem about mental disorder?

no it isn't about mental disorder,

I wrote this during the turbulent times I went through after my brother died.
I guess it's about greeving and acceptance... with a spiritual touch

posted on Jul, 25 2011 @ 03:46 AM
reply to post by GypsK

Well it's a beautiful poem. The lyrics mean something different to me., something that fits perfectly into my life. Thanks for this.

Also, sorry for your loss.
edit on 25-7-2011 by Nomzy because: (no reason given)

posted on Jul, 25 2011 @ 04:00 AM
reply to post by Nomzy

for me,
if it means 'something' to One person,
that's a task completed

thank you
and your welcome!

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