posted on Sep, 13 2009 @ 11:47 PM
reply to post by desertdreamer
Ahhh Yes.... Now this is how I like it. It looked Excellent! Now this is the type of collaborative writing I am accustom to... Granted I only once
worked with another before but we did pump out over a hundred pages of a work that never got published and was eventually destroyed by ex-girlfriends
LOL Live and learn.
Anyways I liked where it went... and I never would of thought of sending in Jenna like that... wow.
So now that the christmas dinner is finished where to next?
New Years eve party at the Job? And what kind of Job? I was kinda thinking Ace Hardware but that could of just as easily been a friend or source...
Lake can still work anywhere... You said something mediocre... I was hopeing it would be something other than wal-mart or fast food. Maybe gas station
or lumber yard or... Construction or contracting?
Just wondering..cause he needs a job right?
Does harly work or go to school?
And we still have not settled on the nukes... Do they come from Iran Venezula, china... But I think that can still wait as we are still doing back
story....
I like the idea of a sudden news injection... Like one moment its their daily life thing and next thing you know
we interrupt your daily show to
bring you this breaking news.. Or would it be the EAS system?... hmmm I do not know.
Also The Marfia lights provides a lot of opportunity for brandon to collaborate with other ATSers...
I really REALLY liked the direction you took the story... I Can't wait to see the next contribution...