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Far Away~

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posted on Aug, 19 2009 @ 11:49 AM
The ghost in you, the ghost in me,
two silhouettes floating out to sea,
On a bed of ice,
Two frozen shadows cast at sea,
No where to be found,
No where to be seen,
but two ghostly figures
vague and drifting,
cast beneath the waves
of Sea.

posted on Aug, 27 2009 @ 11:10 PM
Through time the ice does melt,
but what is found is tender
and raw,
The barren ice does sprawl,
open eyes, open mind of a
broken life washed at shore,

Till heavy waves rush and gush
the unwanted lives of fragment
memories of ghosts
drifitng unsure,
floating idly amonst the brush of the wind,
and unto the waves off shore....

[edit on 28-8-2009 by catalyst2466]

posted on Aug, 29 2009 @ 10:17 PM
End of Part 1.

To be Continued...

posted on Aug, 30 2009 @ 12:55 AM
Part 2....

Years passed by, she was a ghost, caught in time and was gazing from afar, alone in her room. Startling memories crept through of a frozen nightmare.
Crippled by the startling revelation of the shattered memories that drifted unfoldingly, echoing through a whirling storm of endless pain.

She shivered and blocked the images away. She bathed and later
slipped on her red laced dress and placed on her rose perfume. Her long silky dark hair sprang low beneath her breasts, and gently curled in tiny ringlets. The aroma of sweet scented rose highlighted the room.

She lifted the mirror and cast a glance toward her reflection, a smile sprang from the corner of her mouth as she posed her lips in an admiring mock at the image of the face that appeared into the glass mirror.

Pondering at the sight she gasped and let out a cry, "It's of no use?"
The darkness returned and the memories flashed and raged within her soul. Feeling cursed, crushed and wounded, she wept mournfully.

Her soul returned bitter and frozen again as she floated once more into the sea on a bed of ice, feeling distant and vague nowhere to be seen nowhere to be found, but drifting out to sea.

If only she'll face the Sunlight again,
the music shall play once more.

[edit on 30-8-2009 by catalyst2466]

posted on Aug, 30 2009 @ 02:15 AM
This is great man. Can totally feel the emotion. I like the way it was put together too. Good job

posted on Aug, 30 2009 @ 02:33 AM
Hey thanks Mr.Toodles, really appreciate it.

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