posted on Oct, 25 2007 @ 09:14 AM
OK..not sure why you started a new thread to finish part one.Perhaps the Mods could adjust that for you.
Honestly, part one...my god.Beautifully descriptive.I felt like I was really there.No kidding.That was amazing. Literally left me breathless.
Part 2, you need to add more.Please.Iam on the edge of my seat, and that is rare.It takes a lot to put me in this state of mind when I read.YOU NEED
TO KEEP WRITING.
Absolutely amazing piece of work.