posted on Sep, 11 2007 @ 06:40 PM
This topic is good to see has an article now. I know I have thought this was especially interesting of the various "Projects" and "Operations" I
have come across on the web.
It's a quite good and, also, very interesting article.
I notice that some of the sentences are the same as at the external link. I think it could be more correct or such to list the link under a header
called "References". Later, the sentences should be written into another form.
It seems it could also be good to adjust a couple of the sentences, adding things like "It is believed [...]" when the assertion may not be self
evident or provable. Such neutral phrasing has already been used other places in the article, but my impression is there are parts that seem like they
need some more neutrality.
Good addition to tinWiki. You have submitted the link to the reference article, that is really good, but it is important also that article text is
written in original words.