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By the River- SN2022-Non-Writer

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posted on Jun, 30 2022 @ 07:35 PM
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My pack was heavy, we were looking for a place to pitch. We like legroom so I carry a 3man.

We search for a secluded spot and we eventually find one. My back aches from the excessive weight we foolishly packed. For example, the mallet was unnecessary weight because when I went to peg the tent, the pegs were like a hot knife through butter.

Once we were set up, I made some makeshift "chairs" using nearby timber and our sleeping bags.

We cuddled up under the stars and drank our beverages but after a short period of time, something looked odd in the sky.

We looked on at this strange red diamond in the sky and I turned to my companion but she was gone.

Wtf? I thought.

Then I saw her silhouette as she ascended into the red diamond.

I was devastated yet I wondered "was she even human?".

A decade later, I saw her eat a man's brain so I had a lucky escape.



posted on Jun, 30 2022 @ 08:22 PM
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a reply to: Wide-Eyes

Brilliant, Wide-Eyes!


It was all going swimmingly; that ending took me by surprise... shocking!



ETA: Remember to add The End before your editing window closes.

edit on 30/6/2022 by Encia22 because: (no reason given)



posted on Jul, 1 2022 @ 02:07 AM
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Appreciate your Story,

Good Luck in the Contest!
Johnny




edit on 7/1/2022 by JohnnyAnonymous because: (no reason given)



posted on Jul, 1 2022 @ 05:00 AM
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edit on Fri Jul 1 2022 by Jbird because: spam



posted on Jul, 1 2022 @ 06:53 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

Oh, I missed the window. It's my first time and I was bit drunk when I wrote it.

Thank you anyway.



posted on Jul, 1 2022 @ 06:53 AM
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a reply to: JohnnyAnonymous

Thanks Johnny.



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