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Contents of a Dead Man's Stomach [SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 1 2019 @ 09:46 AM
Writing to remember
will eat later
walls red now
blue last time awake
broth salty
yesterday thick and sweet
they're coming

"Again Doctor?"

"Yes, toxin scan shows cadmium poisoning."

"Have Zyltol remove writing tablets from all rooms;
Substitute primitive pencil and paper.
Doctor do we frighten them that much?"

- the end -

posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 01:10 AM
a reply to: pthena

I love the change in point of view.
Had to read it a couple times to understand.
Suspenseful to say the least!

Who was he?
What happened to him?
Who are They!?!?!?!?!
Doctors always creeped me out...

posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 10:56 AM
a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

Who was he?

I guess, since this looks to not be this months winner, I shall dare to offer a spoiler.

I should have spent a bit more time on this story.

Substitute ( bellboy ) for ( Zyltol ).
Change ( primitive pencil and paper ) to ( last season's paper stationary ).
Change (Doctor do we frighten them that much ) to ( Your patients were to enjoy their vacation )

Cadmium is one of the toxic substances found on circuit boards.

edit on 5-4-2019 by pthena because: (no reason given)

posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 04:41 PM
super good!
a reply to: pthena

posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 04:44 PM
a reply to: chris_stibrany

Thank you.

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